
Draft 3
Are drugs a real problem in society today or is this just an ideology exaggerated by the media? This film shows what worries and pressures are forced into teenage dreams by society.
Alex Ryan is just an average teenager living in a normal house in a less than normal situation. This young talented actor has shown how the most normal of situations can become utterly disturbing. His gasping breath brings a sinister reality to everyone’s worst nightmare.
What do all parents worry about when their children go out to a party? That their children will be safe? That they won’t be pressured into doing something they shouldn’t? That they won’t be taken advantage of? Typically this film conveys what happens when all goes wrong at this same party.
At first it appears that Alex has woken up to having a irritating noise in his ear. He appears confused and does what anyone in his situation would do. As he goes to wash his face and wake himself up the sound is becoming increasingly more intense.
In this, Alex Ryan’s first performance, a convincing disturbed character has been conveyed. I’m sure this will be the first in a long line of future films for this talented young man. With only a few minor blips in this short film he has shown a lot of potential.
This was only Joe Hawkins second attempt at creating a short film and from what I can see he will not struggle to get recognised. This second film is a vast improvement on his last effort and I can really see how he has developed as a young director and believe his work can reach new heights later in life.
If you like modern social issues media then this film is a great example with lots of intriguing camera work which is interesting to watch. With only a few minor errors this is a good example of some of Alex Ryan’s early acting and Joe Hawkins early directing.
Draft 2
Are drugs a real problem in society today or is this just an ideology exaggerated by the media? This film shows what worries and pressures are forced into teenage dreams by society.
Alex Ryan is just an average teenager living in a normal house in a less than normal situation. This young talented actor has shown how the most normal of situations can become utterly disturbing. His gasping breath brings a sinister reality to everyone’s worst nightmare a bad dream.
What do all parents worry about when their children go out to a party? That their children will be safe? That they won’t be pressured into doing something they shouldn’t? That they won’t be taken advantage of? Typically this film conveys what happens when all goes wrong at this same party.
At first it appears that Alex has woken up to having a irritating noise in his ear. He appears confused and does what anyone in his situation would do. As he goes to wash his face and wake himself up the sound is becoming increasingly more intense.
In this Alex Ryan’s first performance a convincing disturbed character has been conveyed. I’m sure this will be the first in a long line of future films for this talented young man. With only a few minor blips in this short film he has shown a lot of potential.
Draft 1
Are drugs a real problem in society today or is this just an ideology exaggerated by the media? This film shows what worries and pressures are forced into teenage dreams by society.
Alex Ryan is just an average teenager living in a normal house in a less than normal situation.
This young talented actor has shown how the most normal of situations can become utterly disturbing. His gasping breath brings a sinister reality to everyone’s worst nightmare a bad dream.

Are drugs a real problem in society today or is this just an ideology exaggerated by the media? This film shows what worries and pressures are forced into teenage dreams by society.
Alex Ryan is just an average teenager living in a normal house in a less than normal situation. This young talented actor has shown how the most normal of situations can become utterly disturbing. His gasping breath brings a sinister reality to everyone’s worst nightmare.
What do all parents worry about when their children go out to a party? That their children will be safe? That they won’t be pressured into doing something they shouldn’t? That they won’t be taken advantage of? Typically this film conveys what happens when all goes wrong at this same party.
At first it appears that Alex has woken up to having a irritating noise in his ear. He appears confused and does what anyone in his situation would do. As he goes to wash his face and wake himself up the sound is becoming increasingly more intense.
In this, Alex Ryan’s first performance, a convincing disturbed character has been conveyed. I’m sure this will be the first in a long line of future films for this talented young man. With only a few minor blips in this short film he has shown a lot of potential.
This was only Joe Hawkins second attempt at creating a short film and from what I can see he will not struggle to get recognised. This second film is a vast improvement on his last effort and I can really see how he has developed as a young director and believe his work can reach new heights later in life.
If you like modern social issues media then this film is a great example with lots of intriguing camera work which is interesting to watch. With only a few minor errors this is a good example of some of Alex Ryan’s early acting and Joe Hawkins early directing.
Draft 2
Are drugs a real problem in society today or is this just an ideology exaggerated by the media? This film shows what worries and pressures are forced into teenage dreams by society.
Alex Ryan is just an average teenager living in a normal house in a less than normal situation. This young talented actor has shown how the most normal of situations can become utterly disturbing. His gasping breath brings a sinister reality to everyone’s worst nightmare a bad dream.
What do all parents worry about when their children go out to a party? That their children will be safe? That they won’t be pressured into doing something they shouldn’t? That they won’t be taken advantage of? Typically this film conveys what happens when all goes wrong at this same party.
At first it appears that Alex has woken up to having a irritating noise in his ear. He appears confused and does what anyone in his situation would do. As he goes to wash his face and wake himself up the sound is becoming increasingly more intense.
In this Alex Ryan’s first performance a convincing disturbed character has been conveyed. I’m sure this will be the first in a long line of future films for this talented young man. With only a few minor blips in this short film he has shown a lot of potential.
Draft 1
Are drugs a real problem in society today or is this just an ideology exaggerated by the media? This film shows what worries and pressures are forced into teenage dreams by society.
Alex Ryan is just an average teenager living in a normal house in a less than normal situation.
This young talented actor has shown how the most normal of situations can become utterly disturbing. His gasping breath brings a sinister reality to everyone’s worst nightmare a bad dream.

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