Story ideas reviewed

From looking back at my research i believe that the first short film idea that i have come up with will be the most effective. "Trip" has a fairly good story line that will allow me to use a range of effective shots to produce a good end product. This idea also fits in with what my target market would like according to the questionnaires and focus group that i completed earlier. There is however a small part of this story that once reviewed needed some altering. At the end of the sequence where the main character wakes up for the third time does not work very well. i have been infomed from a third party that this seems slightly repetetive and so whilst filming i shall experiment with diffirent endings and chose the best one.